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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:21 pm Post subject: Chapter 2 |
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 6:36 pm Post subject: Chapter 3 |
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 9:32 am Post subject: Chapter 4 |
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Liana aren't you going to ask for a poll.
I'll read your story real soon.
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no this is just a linear story. I already have it written.
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Thank you so much! this is an awesome thing _________________ My latest SG! (Image courtesy of the lovely Lebrenth)
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Great stuff keep it coming!!
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can you believe i wrote this as a freshman?
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I love this type of story - there's a powerful archetypal theme running through it. The meaning of humanity, the relationship to the animal world, good and evil and love and war... good stuff.
As a writer, though, I'm dying to workshop it. Any plans to send it through a few more drafts to polish it up?
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This is actually the second draft. I've been rewriting each chapter as I go. I plan to get this publisehed some day. Bu before that can happen I have miles to go.
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You wrote this freshman year? Wow I now know I fail at life. thats amazing great work I cant wait to read more!
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I must admit, what I sai before about this being awesome. . .doesn't even cover it. You can feel the emotions tingleing in the room along with you when you read, and can just see the characters before your very own eyes. I was pressed as close to the screen as I could be, nad didn't want to leave for enough time to eat, sleep, or drink. If this is the extent of your work from freshman year, I can't wait to see the rest. Keep up the good work and great writing! _________________ My latest SG! (Image courtesy of the lovely Lebrenth)
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Noni, i wrote the entire thing. It's just in a notebook at present. Each chapter i put up is first read and revised from my original hand written copy.
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