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Kalanna Rai
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The story has launched, the spoiler excerpt has been removed to prevent the skewing of the future...
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This was really fun to read, Kalanna... once again I commend you on your VAST improvements and growth as an author. I'm truly jealous of the leaps and bounds you've shown in your writing skills. This was really great stuff! I found the fantasy/sci-fi blend so evocative it was crazy... so much I wanted to know from what you wrote and its that ability to spark curiosity that makes a read really good... well, one of the things that can anyhow. Your descriptions and pacing are great too. Still gotta watch the spelling now and then though  But I'm not going to go all anal pointing out the niggly things when the whole is THIS good!
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