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supprise 'em with the fireball and such!  The element of supprise is on their side!! 
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Cool chapter. I like the whole idea of disguising themselves as zombies, even though it does seem a bit Shaun of the Dead- like. Oh, well...
It's not gonna win anyways, so carry on with the mayhem!
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Me too actually. Oh well. I will write the next chapter as soon as I can think of something! 
In the meantime, poll is still open!
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I think they have to go for the Eye. If they can't find that, then all of this journey has been for nothing. Locking themselves in with the mad monks will achieve nothing, neither will rescuing their friends in the infirmary. Unless Narg has two eyes against the Necromancer's one, they'll probably lose the fight.
Dashed good chapter, old chap 
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Very good chapter Chinaren, but *sobs* Poor Shorty 
The third eye must be retrieved before the necromancer. As to how - I'll have to think.
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| Quote: | | Very good chapter Chinaren, but *sobs* Poor Shorty |
Aye well. Shogun no longer frequents the site, and I thought it about time for a major character loss*. It's a sad day indeed. 
*There may be another one coming up somewhere else too.
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Wow. I add characters to my story just as you start killing yours off.
Interesting contrast, don't you think?
But anyways, good work so far. I'm liking it.
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Feel free to replace him with me should you like.
And I agree with Shady, got for the eye and then try to get to the Sanctum. But does he know where anything is in the Abbey? Maybe grab hold of a monk as a guide as well.
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I reckon yer should git to the Eye. Yup. Hat off to Shogun.
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| go for theeye. its what you came for.
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| voted my freind!
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This poll is going to be really close!
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| Quote: | | “Defeat the what? Damn it, I hate it when that happens |
Lol - speaking from experience is he? And two new chapters in one day - lots of free time hmm?
As to what to do - what is he a goodie goodie Paladin, or a hardened Warrior Heroy Person. Go straight for the Necromancer - if your friends can't handle themselves you should get some better friends.
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| Quote: | | Lol - speaking from experience is he? And two new chapters in one day - lots of free time hmm? |
I had this one half done, was just stuck at the shapeshifter bit.
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Excellent chapter 
Now, on the grounds that defeating the Necromancer will defeat those that he has summoned, I think Narg is going to keep his eye on the main goal here.
Besides, he's nasty - and as Lordy says, his companions are mercenaries and volunteers. If they can't handle themselves, they should never have come along.
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| F5 Shady and Lordy - you've got the Necromancer on the run, don't slack off.
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Right, it seems like a simple poll is needed this time. A clear cut choice...
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Voted to get the necromancer. My reasons are the same as those listed above.
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i voted to help.
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The 'Get the Necromancer' vote took it, so I have started writing the next chapter.
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Ack - I forgot to comment and missed the vote 
Sorry Chinny.
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I forgive you. It was fairly one sided vote anyway!
I reckon this story only has 2 or 3 chapters left now so, without rushing it, I want to get it done.
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| comeon then! Weres the next chapter?
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Hehe. Sorry, I have started it, but currently stuck half way. It should be up early this week. I don't really have time this weekend.
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I say get some rest. There's something going on here and betrayal is going to be the order of the day - I'm sure of it!
So don't let anyone know you're back until you've rested and got your act together. Then approach the council
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Maybe you could get Gorgus to report back, while you and Mistral go and find lodgings.
She does seem awfully quick to take him back though, especially after he ditched her for Serime. You might think she'd feel snubbed, but I suppose not.
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| Quote: | | There's something going on here and betrayal is going to be the order of the day - I'm sure of it! |
You are so cynical Stoat.  One day you are going to be wrong. Of course, it may not be this day.
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They should rest. Narg can spend some of the time deciding what to do with these world-shakingly powerful artefacts he's now carrying around. And I think Narg knows something isn't right about this whole deal. As for strong beds and Mistral-oriented usage thereof, there is plenty of time for that later, when he's got a better idea what her motives are.
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Okay then. Polls up with the suggestions and a few others so it looks like people are interested.
Vote away, says I.
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| Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 11:29 pm Post subject: |
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voted to go and rest haha with mistral!!!! 
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| voted to go and rest haha with mistral!!!! This muist be nearly finished now eh chinaren
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Yes, I am writing the next chapter now, which will probably be the last one.
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Well, there you have it. My first Storygame* finished.
Bit of a long last chapter, but I wanted to wrap it up.
It didn't have the number of readers I would have hoped for, but I hope those that did follow enjoyed it. I would thank you for all your support and suggestions on the way.
This story is about 67,000 words long, according to Word. I plan to go over the whole thing and re-write it a little bit, to make it more of a novel.
Thanks again to everyone for participating. Another Narg tale will be along at some point in the future. 
*That is to say, the first Storygame I started. The first ep of Narg was my first ever post on IF, so I feel all nostalgic.
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Wooo!  Well done - lots of atmosphere in that not-so-little chapter! I knew it wasn't over - but I didn't know that it wasn't over 3 times before the end
And another Narg on the way? Sounds good to me
Congrats on finishing your first ever storygame!
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