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It could be in an cellar of somebody's house.
I like the idea of the demons and hellbeasts.
It could be in a crumbled building somewhere. Kepp the suggestions coming. I'll put up a poll soon.
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Lol, i like the idea of the sewers, great fun! :biggrin:
but my suggestion is...hmmm...how about under Keys Castle, as there is a small hole that leads underneath it where only the bravest or the stupidest go as the most stargest revolting things are down there - things from past storygames that are out for revenge as no-one has bothered to carry on writing them, to carry on there future.
lol, good chapter storm :biggrin:
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I like Vamps idea too. lol, this might be a hard poll.
I will put it up after the weekend. yey! holiday time!
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The darkest place in the city?  Could be inbetween Fat Fairy cleavage, but Lordy would be crushed there.
The sewers stink. *grumbles* I don't wanna go in the sewers, and all that glowing poo-poo (I'm sure there is some) keeps it from being completely dark.
I know there are some residents with dungeon-like basements in the city- we could try some of those, but we'd have to wear thongs. 
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| Sounds like he's just hanging out inside his own mind...(darkest portion of the city)
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I like the idea of the old city (dark, abandoned) but what about something like where the city backup is, or a test area of the city or an area on the ftp that isn't on the web (hidden or something).
(Sorry but I can't think in other places now. And, sorry because all I know is about computers as you can see)
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I know there are some residents with dungeon-like basements in the city- we could try some of those, but we'd have to wear thongs. |
LOL! Not the pink fully ones? 
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| Vampireidiot wrote: | | ethereal_fauna wrote: |
I know there are some residents with dungeon-like basements in the city- we could try some of those, but we'd have to wear thongs. |
LOL! Not the pink fully ones? |
I think we should go down the dungeons......we might just find pinokio.
I'll go put the poll up shall I?
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The Poll is up! sorry it took me this long 
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Opted for the thongs...
I meant dungeons! Yeah...I said dungeons. 
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Lol voted for the thongs! Lol this could be funny! :biggrin:
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| Ya gotta admit... the thongs really weighted the decision there...
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lol. What a surprise! You Derty lot! ok fine! I voted for the dungeons too. lol. I'll put up the next chapter as soon as possible!
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Chapter 23= Look away! NOW!!
...in a dungeon under Keys Palace.....erm..i think he's kind of wearing a thong?" said Vamps.
This of course made everyone giggle imaturely. Just the thought of a Demon in thongs!
"Erm....I don't mean to spoil your fun. But wasn't there a rule? One concerning the dungeons and thongs as a passwords?" said Sorrow.
"Oh yeah." IM stopped laughing.
"What?" Storm looked around at everyone suspiciously.
"Storm, a few days after you left, there was a new rule added to the city. Any cityzen who wanted to go underground has to have a password or a passaction. For dungeons the passaction is that you have to wear thongs." explained IM.
Storm's face was blank.
"No trousers." added Vamps.
Now, at this point Phang would have done anything to see Storm's expression. But she wasn't there. She was still in chocolate world, with chocolate demons and whatever.
"I think I'll wait at the doors for you." she said to the whole group."
"If she's allowed to drop out, so am I."
"And me!"
"Me too!"
Fauna looked at everyone wierdly.
"You load of wimps! It's only thongs!"
"Fine but I'm going invisible."
"I'll wear a cloud!"
"I'll be a bat!"
"I have a keyring!" said Sorrow with sarcastic joy.
"A powerfull one!" added IM.
"Don't diss the keyring."
"I miss my coke." complained Sorrow.
"We'll get it back don't worry. They've got my blue shinys from the special shiny show hidden with your coke bottles! We will get them back." said Storm suddenly.
"That reminds me. They have my favourite sword too!" said IM.
"They best not have mine! I'll kill them!"
"BACK TO THE POINT PLEASE!" yelled Jnmrcs just as Fauna was about to add her complaint.
"They wont let us in unless we are wearing thongs that they can see." he continued.
"Who?" asked Storm shocked.
"The little goblin barbie thingies." Sorrow took over.
"The whatty Mc what whats now?"
Fauna rolled her eyes. "Look. The thing is unless the guards at the doors cant see us in thongs they wont let us though."
"Thongs it is then!" said Vamps and they set off to find some thongs.....from some place or other...
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The group had now found some thongs.
"I still don't understand why Smee had a collection of these."
"Yeah.....they're pink!" said Vamps with discust.
They arrived at Key Palace gates and turned towards the allyway not far off. They came to a little door. Jnmrcs knocked on it. An eye popped through a hatch that was not there a minute ago.
"Hellohohohoho."
"Hello. We would like to pop in pleasehoho." Good job Jnmrcs spoke their language.
"Youhoho wearho thongs? hoho"
"Yesho hohohohohoho."
The door opened and the group walked in.
They followed Jnmrcs and Fauna straight down the tunnel. Vamps could hear Lordy talking. And everyone could hear Storm complaining.
"Dirty pervs. I mean come on! why thongs? bras over jumpers, knickers over trousers then yeah. We'd at least be able to call our selves Supper Man!"
"I'm not liking this."
"Shut up back there! I'm wearing pink! You cant get worse!" said Vamps.
"I'm wearing a brighter pink than you though." complained IM. Storm couldn't help but giggle.
"I dont see what all the fuss is about. It's only thongs!" Fauna rolled her eyes.
"When can we take them off? Blue isn't my favourite colour." asked Sorrow.
"You shouldn't have picked it then should you? Next time let me have the blue ones and you can have the orange ones!" huffed Storm
"We will take them off soon." said Jnmrcs.
"And what will we wear if we take the thongs off?" Vamps pointed out a very sereous problem.
"That's why you have me here, Vamps. To think like Marge Simpson."
"What?"
"I brought some spare skirts I found."
"What about us?" asked IM.
"Yep! Skirtys for all!" laughed Storm.
"Thanks."
They had no time for any more discussion about their beautifull thongs or what they would wear later because they had just walked into a cave. A large, poorly lighten, slime covered, whole in the ground where Lordy was skipping around like a three year old in his spotty pink and green thongs.
Also in the cave was a.....
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Nice chapter but weird...
Smee with a lot of thongs? 
Also, where are Marge Simpson hidding the skirts?
Me in thongs?
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Smee is our newly elected Mayor DF. I am sure you will get to know us all if you hang around!
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| Quote: | Fauna looked at everyone wierdly.
"You load of wimps! It's only thongs!" |
Great stuff. Loving the thongs.
Lordy is skipping around doing some demonic pleasure dance to honor the whole cause of this mess- none other than the ghastly Neon Buttocks of the Greater Thongs...or something like that.
Ooooh, jiggly
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Since when did I become the butt of all the horrible jokes that go on in this City? I mean - have I made fun of anyone in any of my stories - No.
This may well be a call for vengence...
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What's the issue Lord?
I think we just walked in on your trying to recruit the bats to help your SG win the poll 
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I appologize if I offended you Lordy. My suggestion was for the sake of the story only and not an real accusation aimed at you.
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After all we did have to follow you all the way down here in thongs to find what clever scheme you were cooking up in your thong.
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*screams!*
HELP!! HELP!!!!!! *hides* take it easy Lordy......just don't brake my right arm! I need it this week and my left one dont work!
*stays hidden*
EDIT: I was sure I made sure that i wrote don't break my right arm. lol. I fixed it now. and left hand works again1 yey!
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Poll is up! Sorry it took so long.
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ROFL!!!!!
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On second thoughts, at least he didn't say, "Who else would I want in my lair naked?"
Or worse, in my lair with a whip and handcuffs. Or in my mud pit. Or even with a giant tentac - *is poked in the eye by H&S personell*  
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| No, but I thought it was implied.
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lol! AAAHH!!! IT'S A TIE!! heehee tie!
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hhmm...good idea. I was going to do something to her....but i forgot what. I think I'll turn her into a nightmare demon. Good idea Lordy!
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Supper Man?
Voted for the beastie. If nothing else, my curiosity can be taken care of...
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aahh!! Help! Why do I always get ties? ah well. lol. They're funny.
We'll have to wait and see if one wins. Otherwise the tied options will go in a new poll. If we tie again we go bidding!
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