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Smee Revered IFian
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 8:17 am Post subject: The Sentence Amusement Park |
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The Sentence Amusement Park
A fantastic article I discovered recently that eloquently sums up some of the more common errors we might make with our sentences.
I used to have a lot of fun on the Twister apparently
...What ride do you favour?
Happy Writing
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Chinaren Hallowed IFian
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 4:24 pm Post subject: |
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A very interesting piece.
I disagree with the Tunnel of Love to some extent though. The article he chose doesn't need those ands and buts. They don't add anything* to the prose.
Look at me dissing D.H. Lawrence.
Still, I do think that in creative writing this rule can be regarded as flexible. Just be careful when using.
*In my opinion. _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
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