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Chinaren
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F5 lil. I think it is best to go under cover of an gaurd then or someone ells important. Andchina I was around, but was to frightened if you would want any fables...
*looks about a dark corner her eyes unsure what to do*
Well It is great. I loved the begining of the child rejecting her father...  sorry but it resembles real life.
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Nice avatar...lily....
Umm, f5 I guess.
One thing, though. This story has elements of the spiritual. Like, the shades, and...well, the whole story is spiritual, if you think of it. The concept is similar to Waterworld, which was also a spiritual film deep down. Umm, well, just pointing it out... 
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| Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 2:08 pm Post subject: |
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Wow, just caught up, great story Chinaren!
For the DP, I F5, though his priorities should be in finding the books and any other interesting items he can find.
Keep up the good work!
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| Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 4:07 pm Post subject: |
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Ahv just caught up with this 'un Chinaren. A right gritty tale.
Ah say yer find the books, hide the body and start a fire as a distraction. Then hightale it outa there. Yup.
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Chinaren
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i went for th efire. I think it will be more chaotic. 
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| Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 7:18 pm Post subject: |
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I'm going for the fire too. In a toss-up between chaos and order, I would invariably choose chaos at the moment, and I believe that the fire will have a greater effect anyway. Posing as a guard is way too risky. And before you ask, yes, I did read the chapter before I posted... It's OK, I guess. Maybe. *grins* Lastly... wondrous pun, chinaren, a true stroke of genius. *bows to him mockingly*
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So, split this one off, but the poll was left behind in what is now Chapter 1.
The winner was:
Find the loot. Start a fire and escape in the ensuing chaos.
The next chapter is coming as soon as I get a shot of Insparatium. 
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