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Poll's up!
And I'd like to let everyone know that I'm going to start "Part Three" in its own subsection next chapter (and maybe I'll finally get the chapter summaries caught up!)
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| Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 11:56 am Post subject: |
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Voted! Looking forward to part three Lebby! 
*holds breath* 
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| Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:34 pm Post subject: |
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| Voted. Good chap. Looking forward to the next one.
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It seems practical to me to send most everyone back, but have the stealthiest few track him without engaging. After all, you don't want to lose track of him, but you can't just charge into enemy territory.
I sort of squeezed my vote into the last option, hoping it fit enough in with the above idea. Waiting for part 3!
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| Posted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 8:27 pm Post subject: |
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END OF PART TWO
Part Three is up. Please leave feedback before proceeding by voting below.
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| Out of curosity did you put up a new poll or just rename the poll options?
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| Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 3:58 am Post subject: |
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Really good stuff Lebby, and I love the changed perspective. Keeps it fresh and interesting.
Keep it up! :biggrin:
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| Ingrothechundyer wrote: | | Out of curosity did you put up a new poll or just rename the poll options? |
Should have known better! The poll has now been deleted and reposted as it should have been! Thanks Ingro!
My apologies to anyone who voted on that last poll. Please vote again! Your feedback is greatly appreciated!
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| Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 8:38 am Post subject: |
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| Thanks Lebrenth
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I hate voting for the politically correct option. So here's the judgement call to go with it.
I think your writing is pretty spot-on so far, Lebby. Every decision point leads to a major event of one sort or another. Even though the story has only covered a few days so far, there has been a wealth of detail and a great plot that's advanced with major consequences at times.
We've seen action, we've seen riddles, we've seen quick thinking and character building. This story has the lot. Well done so far
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Hahaha! Good one Shady, but I have to agree. The writing is well paced, the characters interesting and deep. The settings and detail are vivid and atmospheric. And the decision points are clever, give the reader a good angle to vote from, and the outcomes are always fun and surprising. Taggert's death was really a shock, and very well done. Really quite *sob* emotional... 
Keep it up! :biggrin:
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I only have one trouble, and that is the poll below - there aren't enough options, so I was forced to go with just tight, as anything else would have been wrong.
And reading through that made no sense what-so-ever. My apologies.
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I'm thrilled that I've corralled you into making a positive vote, Lordy, but please tell me what you would have voted if the option was available.
Thank you for your kind remarks everyone  ! Makes me feel all warm inside.
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| In Part Two, how do you feel the pacing of the story has gone? |
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| Total Votes : 11 |
| Who Voted: Chinaren, ethereal_fauna, jnmrcs, Lebrenth, LordoftheNight, Shady Stoat, Smee, Solomon Birch |
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