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The Dark Citizen
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Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:51 am Post subject: The Dark chapter 14 - Splatter. Part one. |
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To read this you need to be some kind of sicko that gets off on suffering, vulgar porn and all the rest. You know it, The Dark knows it, let’s not pretend any more. Just read it, get it over with, then relax in your newfound freedom from moral obligation.
This has been A Dark warning. Thank you for your attention.
Chapter 14. Splatter. Part one.
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Last edited by The Dark on Wed Jun 04, 2008 6:09 am; edited 1 time in total
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D-Lotus Venerable IFian
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Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:08 pm Post subject: |
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Shocking! It was Prime's place! (Pun intended).
I detected this mistake:
Quote: | Stepping over the child’s body, he peering around the corner of a crumbling building. |
As for the rest, very intriguing and awesome. Now I'll go get my popcorn and wait for the second half. _________________ Chapter 5: The Rendezvous
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Chinaren Hallowed IFian
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Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 3:25 am Post subject: |
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Ooh, exciting chapter there Dark.
~Stuffs popcorn into his face whilst waiting~ _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
My Amazon page.
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Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 12:17 am Post subject: |
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*Steals some of Chinny's popcorn, slurps on Slushpuppy and chomps on peanut M'n'M's.*
Half the amusement comes simply from reading your warnings. Keep it coming, Darky.
_________________ The path of my life is strewn with cowpats from the Devil's own Satanic Herd!
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The Dark Citizen
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Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 3:34 am Post subject: |
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Part 2 of this chapter, complete with decision point, shall be posted in a new thread momentarily. _________________
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The Meaning Of Fear Respected Citizen
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Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 3:19 pm Post subject: |
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Quote: | “This is fun, I should come down her |
Here...
Otherwise, the writing is grammatically and spelling-ly perfect. _________________ Cherish all your memories, even the bad ones, for they are what makes you who you are.
Doors to the truth, an SG where a boy is propelled into worlds he is unfamiliar with. He crosses many worlds, and sees many things that force him to throw away his innocence, once, and for all. Fourth Chapter, out for viewing!
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