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Chapter 1
It was the night before christmas, Smeedles, stood in a giant christmas pudding costume, was conjuring up a delicious dinner for his guests. Whilst singing along to "I wish it could be christmas everyday" by wizard.
"Ding, Dong"
"Ah, there is the first guest" he said as he hobbled along the hallway to answer the door.
"Hi Smee! Squealed Crunchy. "I decided not to dress up this year, those little toads have been keeping me up all night so I didn't have time" She moaned
"Oh yes I forgot that you always looked like a frog. Well come in and have some champagne"
The two of them scrambled to the kitchen. Smee poured them both a glass of a very odd looking slime green coloured liquid.
" My own recipe" he exclaimed.
" Uh...Looks lovely" she stuttered.
"Chin, chin!" Smee laughed and downed his in one. Crunchy took a sniff of the concoction and almost gagged. She took a deep breath and poured the gooey liquid into her mouth. As Smee was blathering on about his great invention, Crunchy took her chance and spat it out! Whilst also tipping the remaining liquid in the glass down the sink.
"Mmm..." She smiled and rubbed her tummy trying not to be sick. "You'll have to give me the recipe. So I know never to make it by accident" she muttered to herself.
"A great chef never spills his secrets" he replied, chuckling at the pun.
"Can't wait for the main course" said Crunchy as she gulped, feeling rather sick. "What is it?"
"Well its a classic, but you'll have to wait and see." He giggled to himself.
"Great!" she said not very enthusiastically.
Suddenly, they heard a noise.
"Zapp!"
"What the hell was that?" squealed Crunchy. They ran out into the hall and found Cy standing in the middle of the room, dressed as a worm wearing a thong!
"Oh hello Cy, I love your outfit" Crunchy said laughing uncontrollably.
"Hello, I brought you those frogs legs you asked for." Said Cy. Crunchy turned and glared at Smee.
"...Chocolate frogs legs" he swiftly said.
Ding, dong" went the door for a second time.
Ding,dong...ding, dong" went the door again and again.
"Keep your head on I'm on my way!" Smee shouted. He waddled to the door and opened it. It was Tikky. She was dressed as a pirate complete with an emerald green jewelled eye patch, with a cutlass at her side.
"Oh hello Tikky, you look fab!" screamed Crunchy.
"Thanks. One does ones best. Oh I also brought a chocolate gateau" Said Tikky excited.
"Oh my god thankyou. He's been cooking again" whispered Crunchy. "I wouldn't try the champagne if I were you"
"Point taken" replied Tikky. She shivered and rubbed her arms to keep warm. "It's freezing out here." She came in and shut the door.
"Wait a minute Tikky" Smee said re-opening the door. "Your sister hasn't come in yet" He stuck his head out and looked around. Then turned back to Tikky with a puzzled look on his face.
"Tikky... wheres Tatty?" Questioned Smee.
So here's the DP. Where is Tatty? Why isn't she at the party? Does Tikky have anything to do with it?
(I am Tatty and Tikky is my older sister, for those who didn't know)
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| Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 6:19 am Post subject: |
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Excellent start, Tatty - although I'm not convinced you've quite captured the elegant precision of my cooking correctly.
Ahem..
Anyhoo, I suspect Tatty is actually hiding outside, too embarassed to come in, having gotten her costumes muddled and is dressed as a pumpkin.
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| I also think it is a costume related problem, since she was the parrot that should have been sitting on Tik' shoulder. But she got toppled by a low tree-branch and hasn't been seen since.
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| Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 6:29 am Post subject: |
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I was thinking Of me being a parrot too! Great minds think alike!
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Very good for your first SG post Tats! Well done! 
I reckon Tatty is lying somewhere in the bushes, totally wrapped in toilet paper or in duct tape like a mummy. Don't ask me how or why I got to that idea, because I'm clueless myself. 
I like the start, now enjoy your writing experience!
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She's waiting to surprise people! She hid herself in a giant gift-wrapped box, but forgot to find someone to bring it inside, so she can't get out.
Or something.
Anyways, good start so far! Very festive.
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Thanks for all your comments! The Ideas are really good!
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| Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 10:17 am Post subject: |
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Well done, Lil' Sis!
I think that mabye you were annoying me before we left for the party, so I had to make you walk the plank! 
I also like Smee and Crunchy's ideas for costume. I say, you were wearing the parrot outfit to the party, but it somehow gets ruined*sniggers evily* and all that Smee has for you to change into is a pumpkin costume left from Halloween.
Really good story Tats!
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| Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 1:15 pm Post subject: |
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Poll's up guys! Get your votes in
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| Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 7:21 pm Post subject: |
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Just had to vote for the 'Walk the Plank' option!
Even to fantasize about doing such a thing is simply delicious!
Though I was tempted by the costume malfunction. Seeing as you always have to look perfect when you go out (though I can't really talk in that department!), it would be funny to see you looking far from it.
But with the plank option, your costume would be ruined anyway. And it must mean that I have a pirate ship to go with my outfit! Mega Bonus! 
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Haha You wish! 
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Yeah, you have no idea how much!
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Get that image out of your head because it's never going to happen love!
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Well, not exactly like that mabye. But I'd settle for a swimming pool and a rubber dingy!
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The pole finishes this weekend! Keep your votes coming in 
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| You're doing well with this one, Tats!
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Ok thanks for all of your votes here is chapter two!
"How should I know?"
"Tikky, she's your sister!" Smee exclaimed. Tikky laughed to herself.
"Tikky" warned Smee.
"Well I might have left her behind."
Ok. Go back home and get her" Said Crunchy.
"She's not at home"
"Where is she then?" questioned Crunchy.
"Umm...well. It was dark so I'm not entirely sure"
"Right, everyone get your coats. We must find her" said Cy.They all rushed out into the darkness.
"Poor little Tats, all alone. How will we ever find her?" said Crunchy worried.
"Well, she's wrapped in a big, red box. It shouldn't be that hard" confirmed Tikky.
Suddenly, Thunderbird swooped down carrying a large red box with his beak, shortly followed by Kang.
"We found a bunch of gnomes trying to steal this present so we decided to rescue it." said Kang. "There seems to be someone or something trapped inside it but we couldn't open it.
"LET ME OUT OF HERE!" screamed the contence of the box. Tikky started laughing but suddenly, the box erupted in a flash of claws and fur. A furious looking polar bear stood before them. They all ran for their lives, all but Tikky who was rolling around on the floor giggling.
"How could you leave me like that!" sceamed the bear in Tattys voice. She was ignored. With one swipe of her paw, Tikky was sent flying towards a bush. There was a moment of silence. then suddenly, there arose an almighty roar and out pounced a giant grey wolf. The rest of them were still scared out of their wits but mouths wide open with shock as the two beasts sprang at each other and they proceeded to roll around in the middle of the street, squealing every few seconds with chunks of fur flying in all diections.
"Get off me you overgrown furball" Shouted Tikky.
"Make me!" Tatty said as she sprawled herself across Tikky making it impossible for her to escape.
"Ahh...get off snickers!" Tikky cried.
"No, I'm quite comfy actually" tittered Tatty. Suddenly, there was a burst of laughter and they turned to see their all of friends falling over themselves with uncontrollable mirth.
"What are you laughing at, I'm in agony with this great lump suffocating me!" Yelled Tikky but that just made them worse and they laughed even more.
Finally, Tikky managed to squeeze out. The both of them jumped to their feet and ran at the others mennaceingly. They fled but stopped and turned back when they heard the pair giggling.
"Ah, got ya!" cackled Tikky, as she and Tatty went in for a high five.
"How come you never told us that you guys could shapeshift?" asked Cy.
"You never asked" replied Tatty gesturing to the remains of their costumes. "Do you think you could do something about these, Smeedles" Tatty said sweetly. Smee smiled and with a snap of his fingers they were repaired.
"Come on, lets get back. It's freezing out here." said crunchy. They all wandered down the street back to Smee's house.
Back at the house, everyone was having a great time dancing, drinking, having a right laugh.
"Ah you're back" giggled Smee as Tatty and Tikky came down the stairs as their normal selves. Tikky back in her pirate costume and Tatty was dressed as a lady santa. 'Jinglebell rock' came on and they all hit the dance floor.
The dancing went on for a while. But Crunchy couldn't go on any longer so she collapsed on the sofa, exhausted.
"How about a bit of magic, Smee?" chuckled the frog.
"Yeah, come on Smee"
"Smee, Smee, Smee!" roared the guests.
"Okay, okay" They all snuggled down on the sofa and he began.
He started off juggling bright blazing fire balls. Then he went on to giant creme pies. But that ended up being a bit messy.
"Okay, for my final trick I shall need a volunteer."
"Me, me. Oh pick me!" shouted Cy. He wriggled to the centre of the room and prepared himself.
"I will make the worm disappear... ABRA...KADABRA...ALAKASAM!" bellowed Smee and in a puff of smoke Cy was gone.
Ok the DP is what happens to Cy? Does he come back at all, doe she come back as something else? Thanks for reading.[/img]
Got the picture up finally! Yay!
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Ooo I got it I got it! He has been transported to an alternate universe where the evil Ifians reside!!
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Here's some stuff I started writing a long time ago. Orb. Nexus.
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Great second chapter, Tats! Especially the fighting! Such an accurate depiction of RL!
I actually like Phantomfan's idea, so I'm not going to suggest anything else. I think a real factor here is, is Smee powerful enough to be able to bring him back?*Is sceptical* And if not, who is brave enough to pass into the land of Evil IFians, to get Cy back?
Well done Tatty! 
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| Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 4:28 am Post subject: |
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Thanks for all your great Ideas guys! 
Keep them coming in
and of course Tikky it always ends up when Im sprawled making it impossible for you to get out! Otherway round me thinks!
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| I'm also of the mind that this DP signals the beginning of an adventure. He's been banished to the Land of Odd, and we've got to get him back before things get too random.
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Tats, I was thinking more of the 'rolling around, fur flying everywhere' bit (though it would be hair rather than fur!). But yes, you're right. It would end up the other way around, no thinking required. It would! And that is my speciality move, sit on top of someone till they beg for mercy (with tickling allowed if they are found to be too stubborn to beg! )
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Is the DP question's gender change intentional? "Does he come back at all, doe she come back as something else?" Heheh, I like the gender change idea. I say he returns me as a woman! That would make things interesting, since I am a straight guy. 
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Hmmm teleported to the IF thong factory, landing in a bucket containing thousands of them springs to mind, but I like the idea of an Adventure to Odd.
Watch out for your spellings, Tatty - it got a bit sloppy in places which can interupt the fun of your story.
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Ok thankyou for all your great comments and Ideas! Loving the thong and the woman idea!
Oh Smee thanks for pointing them out. I've corrected as many of the spelling mistakes that I could spot!
But in my defence this laptop is really awkward to use so that could have been the problem to alot of it  hehe
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THERE IS ABSOLUTALY NOTHING WRONG WITH MY LAPTOP!!! 
*strokes the laptop affectionatly* Poor little thing! It's not even two weeks old!
Bad Tatty! It's your own fault if you can't be bothered to check your spellings!
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I say Cy has accidentally been turned into a real worm - that size, and that mental ability! But he can still talk at normal volume, oddly enough, so they can hear what he says (which will just been an endless stream of banal worm-thoughts) even when they have no idea where he is.
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Got the picture up on here, finally! Not that you really deserve it Tats, after that comment about my laptop! But, it gives me a chance to show off a bit too, I suppose! *giggles* Even though it isn't one of my best!
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Ok everyone the poll is up!
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Can you include me as an Evil If-ian! make my scales green because my scales are red and you want to make the evil copies Opposite 
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I'm not hugely happy about the 'evil Ifians' thing winning because it's been done several times before, but I'm interested to see how you handle this.
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Hey guys!
Sorry for the delay! But I've had so much school work I just haven't had time for anything else. There is a half term holidays in a couple of weeks so I'll have a crack at it then.
Yes Dragonite you may be an evil ifian if you want!
If I'm lucky I might get this sg finished by next IF-mas!
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Hey guys!
Sorry I couldn't get the next chapter out but it is in mid progress so it shouldn't be too long
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Chapter 3
They all gasped and then there was silence. Smee had a puzzled look on his face.
“Smee? Everything alright?” questioned Crunchy.
“Yes, yes. I’m just trying to remember the words to make him reappear.” Smee said, still with a puzzled look on his face, which gradually turned to worry. Smee turned away sheepishly.
“Smee!” shouted Crunchy. “Where is he?”
“I…I don’t know”
“What do you mean you don’t know? You must know how to bring him back.” Said Tikky Smee gave a terrified look and then fled to his study and searched frantically for his spell book.
He returned a few moments later carrying a large, ancient book. He scanned the pages and suddenly stopped. His face grew more and more frightened.
“Oh no!” he gasped. “According to this, I’ve just sent Cy to the alternate evil IF!” They all looked at one another not knowing what to do.
“It will all be okay” assured Crunchy. “It’s a spell book; there must be a reversal spell to bring him back.” Smee turned the page but only found a torn edge. It wasn’t there.
“Oh well, that’s just perfect!” exclaimed Tatty.
“Well, we must go help our friend. Who’s with me?” he said as he reached his hand into the middle of the crowd, followed by the rest of them.
“Go team IF!” they all shouted.
“Right, everyone hold on to me, and close your eyes” said Smee. “Biff. Baff. Boff!” They all disappeared in a puff of smoke.
‘Poof!’ They all reappeared but when they saw what was before them, their mouths were gaping open and their eyes were popping out of their heads with astonishment.
“It looks like World War Three,” remarked Kang. They stood in the middle of the city centre surrounded by collapsed and crumbling buildings. The air was filled with dust and thick smoke. They all looked around in dismay at the ruined city, each recognizing places they knew and loved.
“Let’s find Cy and get out of here ASAP! Thunderbird declared.
In the distance, they beheld the dark turrets and battlements of a castle. Great bolts of lightning crashed down on the earth around it, creating long looming shadows, as the thunder crackled menacingly. They were horrified, as they gazed, transfixed at the castle of the great King Key.
At that moment, they heard a cry, coming from a nearby, half-collapsed building.
“That sounded like Cy!” exclaimed Tatty and they raced towards the source of the sound. They crept into the building and followed the cries until they reached a doorway. They peaked in to discover their wormy friend tied down to a chair, having countless cream pies hurled towards him from all directions. But when they looked for the attackers, at first they couldn’t see anything, just a mass of dark shadows. Then they saw that they shadows started to separate and shift until vague figures started to form.
“Oh my god! Are those the evil ifians?” gasped Crunchy.
“I think so” replied Tikky.
“Ahhhh! Help!” cried Cy as another cream pie splattered across his face.
“Right. I’ll show them” Smee declared as he cast a fireball at the nearest shadow. There was a deathly scream, followed by a hissing, popping noise as the fireball smashed into it’s target. As they watched, a legion of glowing, red eyes turned to glare at them.
“What do we do now?” Crunchy gulped.
Okay, the D.P is exactly that. What do they do now?
Thanks for reading and sorry it took so long to do the next chapter.
Sorry dragonite that I couldn't fit you into my idea I'll put you into a later chapter i promise
Thankyou for your help Tikky
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No problem, sis! Happy to help out. Though you are perfectly capable of doing it yourself. You've just gotta stop being worried about using descriptive words. You proved that you can do it, when we were discussing it yesterday.
I know it is the most obvious choice, but I like the idea of a big battle, a fight between good and evil. It would be great to see some samuri action from Kang, maybe a kung-fu Crunchy? *giggles*
Really great effort on this Tats. I know how hard you worked on it. Well done!
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Good chapter! Nice to see you haven't just gone with them meeting people with opposite personalities but took the 'evil' bit a little more literally.
I don't think our main characters, particularly Smeedles, would hang around now they've got the Evils onto them. If they run away it's so they can plan a better way to free Cy and if they're followed, well then Cy's left alone. Easy!
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I know there isn't many options guys but it'll do! So whats it to be? Fight or flight?!?!?!
Hopefully I'll have a chapter up in the next couple of weeks and maybe it'll be finished by Ifmas!
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I don't know if I should vote, seeing that it's my wormy tail on the line.
Let's see if you love me enough to save me.
(Realizes he signed his death wish by saying this XD )
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I think we can safely say that your friends will remain loyal to you Cy! 
I think it's probably going to be a FIGHT! 
Thanks for the votes guys!
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| I'm not sure what running would accomplish and I would *love* to see how Smee *tries* to use magic to do something with the pies
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I just read the whole thing and loved it.
*bumps*
Looking for more... when's the next chapter up?!
Oh... and you can call me Vikas
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I haven't done any of it in like a year but I actually started writing it again last night and there will be a new chapter up very soon
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Yay!!!
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Chapter 4
The crowd of friends huddled closer and closer together as the shadows slowly lurked towards them.
“Oh my god, oh my god! What the hell are we doing?” Said Kang, grasping hold of his Samari sword.
They all began to shudder in fright.
“Gahhh!” screamed Smee, as one of the shadows launched a massive cream pie at him.
A giant cackle came from one of the shadows as it hopped in the air. The figure looked strangely familiar. It had a ball-shaped body with four thin legs coming off it. Another one, in the shape of a small dragon cast a shadow ball at the group, which burst into a puff of smoke. No body could see a thing.
“Mwuhahaha, you will never beat us.” said the shadow, creeping closer.
“Screw this! Tatty. Let’s rock!” announced Tikkani.
They both looked around the group with a mischievous grin on their face and then they all turned to face the enemy.
“You’re gonna love this” boasted Tats.
Tikky and Tatty ran towards the shadow, flew gracefully into their animal form and began thrashing their paws. But, this did nothing but frighten the beasts at first.
“Alright Tiks, we’re gonna have to get serious now.” Tatty remarked.
As she stepped back and poised herself, she smirked and then let out a flare of ice cold wind at the shadows. They all began to burst into nothingness. Tikky slammed her front paws on the floor, lifted her head and released an intense bolt of lightning at the attackers, which made them melt to the floor.
Before they knew it, the large shadow mass was swiftly getting smaller and smaller.
“Take this!” Shouted Smee, throwing another fire ball.
The monsters screeched in pain as they burnt in the flames. The rest of the group charged feircly towards the opposition, as Crunchy hopped over to Cy to help him. Thunderbird began to flap his wings briskly and whipped up a powerful wind to trap the evil beings so they could be defeated. Kang pulled out his sword, which emitted a bright magical light and swung for the demons. With a burst of fire, thunder and ice there was an immense, thrilling flash. The darkness changed into light as all of the shadows faded away.
The others rushed over to Cy, who was collapsing from the brutal attack he had endeavoured, as they dragged him out of the chair .
“I really, really want some vanilla hot chocolate!” Cy cried.
“Of course, you poor thing, let auntie Crunchy sort you out sweetie.” Crunchy said as she wrapped an arm round him.
They all made a quick escape from the dark building and found themselves in a eerie and foggy street.
“So… Smee. Do you know how to get us home?” asked kang expectantly.
“Of course. I’m not going to make that mistake again. Ok everyone let’s go home and enjoy the rest of Christmas.”
“Wait. Everyone shut up.” whispered Thunderbird.
They all looked around. ‘Tap…tap…tap.’ A large faint figure began to emerge from the mist and it was getting closer and closer.
Ok so the DP is Who is that? A new character? Another enemy? Will they get home or will something else put off their Christmas even more.
Sorry it’s been so long and my chapters so short and probably really crap, I just felt like writing some :L Oh and Cy, sorry for making you look so feeble. I promise I’ll make you more heroic in the next chapter. Ooh and if anyone would really like to be in the story, just say and tell me like what you are, like if you’re a wizard or a dragon or whatever
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DP?! Its a friend... and its me
Lol, loved this.. looking forward to more....
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As promised, I caught up, and I love the chapter. It's perfectly fine however you portray me, just write what you think you should regardless of what I might think. You did a great job so far. Okay, I'd say it's Samantha Claus, also known as Mrs. Claus. And she's evil. Naughty.
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I read this a couple days ago and wanted to say it was really enjoyed but I wasn't logged in at the time and didn't have much time to post so I went on and forgot to comment until now... oops... sorry
Anyhow, so, yeah. Very much enjoyed this. You amaze me in how well you can write such short and concise chapters and still get us to a DP (I'm really bad at doing that...)
As for the DP, hmm... I had a thought earlier but I can't recall it now. Gimme a bit to remember it and come back when I do.
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Hey Sis! Great chapter, even if it has been a long time coming. It is short, but not lacking anything due to it. Very exciting, and well paced chapter.
For the DP, I think it's Santa, who got accidentally side-tracked into the realm of the evil IFians, and another group of them have knocked him over the head, leaving him disorientated, and stolen his reindeer, sleigh and all the presents! *gasp*
Looking forward to the next one! Keep it up!
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^ I actually like that one, but I want !me! to be introduced later, so yeah, Vikas and Pope maybe.
*Proceeds with Caution*
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| Thunderbird wrote: | | It's Pope and the Muralidharan Bros. Weary travellers from the distant land of OF. (think 3 wise men Wink ) |
From OF?! Hell no, Im a good guy
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I don't mind being an eil wiseman....
Anyway, this is definatly an interesting tale! The chapters are short, but fun, and as far as I can tell, the portrayal of all the characters is accurate! *Big thumbs up*
There are quite a fer punctuation mistakes scattered throughout the story.... Several times I had to re-read things a few times to figure out where one sentance ended and another began... Very confuseing, may want to check through on that front....
As for the DP? It's......Good King Key who was transported here some time ago and Evil King Key took his place in the good realm and has slowly been destroying IF's economy! Now, Good King Key needs the party's help to restore his throne and return EKK back to the evil realm!
Can't wait to see more! Oh, and I'm hatching your egg and growing your hatchling for you
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Ok thankyou for all your lovely suggestions and support
Ooh and thanks Pope. Your a brilliant chief dragon hatcher/ grower
Time for the pole
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haha that's what I was thinking because not much could happen
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**bumps**
Still waiting for the next chapter...
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I've just got back from holiday but i start sixth form next week so ill try to find some time
Thanks for all of your votes guys!
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I'm always late to all the good stories... Oh well. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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...... *MAJOR BUMP*
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The 5th and Final Chapter
As the large figure came closer, the group snuggled closer together, some clinging on to each other for dear life.
"I can't take any more of this tonight." whined Tikky, clenching onto Tatty’s hand tightly. But it soon became apparent that the figure was not one but three beings, shuffling closer and closer. They seemed to be humming some kind of music.
"Umm... hello" said Thunderbird.
"Hello there, are you lost?” said one if the figures.
"Yes we are" said Kang in excitement.
"Well we are here to help you. We are going to see the king, bearing him many gifts. He's such a great king. I’m sure he'd help you on your way as well and share his riches with you." said another one of the figures.
“Seven gifts, to be precise,” said the third figure with a grin, nudging one of his cronies in the side.
"No. We don't need your hel..." said Smee but he was cut off by Tikky putting her hand over his mouth.
"Riches?" asked Tatty excitedly.
"Oh yes. Come this way"
Smee tried to object but just a muffled noise came out. The rest of the group all smiled at each other and followed the three mysterious men.
"Oh how rude of us. We didn't even introduce ourselves. I'm Pope."
"I’m Vikas Muralidharan and this is my brother Vishal."
"So nice to meet you." hissed Vishal. "Around these parts, we're known as the three wise men."
"Nice to meet you too." said Tatty, skipping along asking questions.
"There's something not right about this." stated Smee.
"Oh take a chill pill" answered Crunchy patting him on the back. "It'll all be fine... and we'll be rich!" she giggled.
"Here we are gang." declared Pope. "The king will be so happy to see all of you, he just loves visitors."
The three wise men began to cackle to each other as they led the group up to a huge castle. As they approached, Vishal gave a loud clap of his hands, and a drawbridge began to lower down, eventually hitting the ground with a loud thump. They all walked down a long, lit hallway.
“I wonder what riches the king possesses.” said Thunderbird.
“Money!” cried Tatty.
“Gold!” Kang added. Just then, the three wisemen opened two large doors into a huge dark hall and disappeared into the gloomy blackness.
“Hey! Where did you go?” shouted Tikky. They all began to wander the room.
“Don’t split up!” ordered Smee. It was too late. The doors had slammed behind them and a roar of chuckling filled the room. They all began to shout and cry out to each other. As the torches were lit one by one, they realised they were once again surrounded by the dark shadows that inhabited this evil place. The three friends that had escorted them here had now returned to their original black figures with glowing red eyes. They all stood there in a terrified clump and began to shudder as a colossal shadow filled the room. His massive eyes gave off an intense flaming glare. With a large, golden crown on top of his head, he proceeded to the centre of the room, where the Ifians sat, shaking silently.
"Ah, the graceful and powerful King Key, we are here and we bare gifts of greatness that we believe will please you immensely,” asserted Evil Vishal.
"Here. These two will do fine for performers" said Evil Pope, grabbing Crunchy and Thunderbird and shoving them forward.
"And these four would make a charming addition to your servants." suggested Evil Vikas, pushing Smee, Tikky, Tatty and Kang on the floor at the feet of the king.
“Ah. I think we could find another use for you two.” He smirked as he stroked Tikkys thigh.
“UH! You pig!” screamed Tatty.
“How dare you!” Tikky added, kicking out violently at the shadowy hand touching her.
"QUIET! ...And him?" hissed King Key.
"Oh. We thought he'd make a nice main course for our banquet tonight" said evil Vishal as he grinned and gestured at Cy.
"Ah... Worm. My favourite" Key announced licking his lips.
"I..I'm not a r..real worm... your Highness..." Cy replied.
"SILENCE!" screamed the King. Cy shrivelled, not knowing what to do.
"You three evil wisemen have done well tonight. You will be rewarded substantially." said King Key, while an evil smile appeared across his face as he looked over the seven scared little faces that lie before him.
"Lock them away for now." ordered Key. They all got bundled away and chucked in dirty prisons.
"NO! My shoes are all muddy" said Tatty beginning to cry.
"Well you all have yourselves to blame, I wanted to go home there and then." said Smee sticking his nose in the air.
"Can't you just do it now?" asked Crunchy.
"No. You don't understand magic at all. We must all be holding hands to make it back and that's no longer possible. Is it Tikky?” Smee shot the shape-shifter a glare. “If you weren’t all so engrossed in the prospect of money we wouldn’t be in this mess!”
"So-rry! we're not all magicians Smee." said Crunchy, her temper building.
"Where's Cy?" said Tatty.
"Oh no! Have they eaten him already?" cried Tikky.
Suddenly there was a loud slapping noise and all of them rushed to look out beyond the bars of their cages. On the other side, something was happening. The Wise Men were rushing all over the place, along with their king, and all seemed to be focusing on attempting to control a spinning blur in the centre of the room.
“It’s Cy!” Kang said joyfully.
“He’s gone mad!” Thunderbird added.
"How dare you treat me and my friends this way! You won't like worms when I’m finished with you!" shouted Cy as he began to repeatedly smack the evil king across the face, until he had lost all consciousness. The three wisemen tried to fight him but they had no chance against the spinning attack Cy was now executing. There were shadows flying everywhere.
The clan all cheered for him.
"My hero" said Tikky, fluttering her eye lashes.
"So how did you get out of your cage? There were bars all around you." asked Smee.
"Worms are good at digging holes" laughed Cy.
"Okay. We are going home. Right, now, everyone, hold hands and close your eyes." announced Smee.
They all huddled together and grabbed each others hands. "una...tiati...yimomom...buff!"
The group began to glow and float into the sky. The next thing they knew they were back in Smee’s living room.
"Oh thank god we made it back" gasped Crunchy. "And we all got here in one piece. Well... nearly” she said and began to giggle. Cy was stood in a long magicians robe and hat. They all turned to face Smee who was now only stood wearing a tiny thong.
“GAHH! That blasted spell book!” Smee shouted as he stormed out of the room, with his bare bottom on show. The clan all laughed and cheered.
FINALLY! I did it! Sorry for the delay
ok sorry to any of you that wanted to be good but i just couldn't work out a way tot put you in and work with the idea from the pole so I hope you enjoy it all the same
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*giggles* Very well done, Sis! I'm glad you finally got this one finished, and this final chapter didn't disappoint. I guess that having got to know quite a few of the people that you've included in this SG, the jokes/funny situations they're placed in at their expense seem all the more hilarious (and I know they'll find them equally entertaining themselves too ) Poor Smee seems to be getting the brunt of it in this final installment. *giggles*
Really enjoyed it, Tats, and I really hope you have a go at doing another. You have a knack for thinking up these funny situations and I think that it would be a popular read, as this one was. In fact, I'm sure that so many people would want their IF personas involved in such a project, you could possibly think up some way to make a game of it maybe, and add even more to the entertainment! (I'd give you a hand with that part if you wished) Anyway, have a think about it.
Keep up the good work (if you choose to continue)!
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AWESOME. XD
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With just a few days before x-mas, I thought I would try this one out. I'm so glad I did. It was very enjoyable.
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