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Don't forget Queenie. 
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Shady, you missed Queenie. We want him to be happy, too. But I say don't waste your time reviving him, just lead the bobs, preferably Big Bob, to where he is.
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but remember - the king bob gave you a faulty anti-detection device, why should you repay him in any way above the latter of your agreement
free the god and leave him where we is
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Good chapter Chinaren.
Your review is progressing as well. 
I too want all the Bobs to be happy. You have not only found their god, but defeated the lich and the devil so they should be very happy with you. Therefore more than content with just being told where Muaddib is whilst you leave the castle.
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Thanks for the comments all.
Okay then, time to put the poll up!
Happy voting! Damn, that's catching.
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I voted to tell King Bob. Happy Bob, happy Queenie, everyone's happy 
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^ditto^ (I think I've been saying that a lot lately)
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You should set your Function 5 key to say: <presses f5> I agree with Stoat.
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| chinaren wrote: | | Suneila wrote: | ^ditto^ (I think I've been saying that a lot lately)
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Chinaren you biatch! I just pushed F5 and it reloaded the post page!
On that missing post, there was in fact something saying that if it didn't do as you suggest it does, you owed me 100 Fables. Money please.
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| Voted to tell the Bob's where he is. Nice chapter
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Chinaren you biatch! I just pushed F5 and it reloaded the post page!
On that missing post, there was in fact something saying that if it didn't do as you suggest it does, you owed me 100 Fables. Money please. |
*facepalm* silly silly phang. next time try press crtl and w before you press F5. just a suggestion
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| lordofthenight wrote: | | Phang wrote: | | chinaren wrote: | | Suneila wrote: | ^ditto^ (I think I've been saying that a lot lately)
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Chinaren you biatch! I just pushed F5 and it reloaded the post page!
On that missing post, there was in fact something saying that if it didn't do as you suggest it does, you owed me 100 Fables. Money please. |
*facepalm* silly silly phang. next time try press crtl and w before you press F5. just a suggestion |
Shut up.
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| Quote: | | Chinaren you biatch! I just pushed F5 and it reloaded the post page! |
Hahahaha! That's almost* worth paying a 100Fables! 
Now then you two be nice! 
*Almost, but not quite.
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Hmph!
Well to get you all back I require an orchestra *orchestra appears* now your fate is sealed!
*raises conducting stick...and begins to play...* baam, baam, baam...baam baam baam baam...
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Silence upon ye, and let us get back on topic before I smite you with a haddock.
Badom, babababababaam...
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*grins* Loverly stuff! I wondered when Serime would be back.
I don't think Narg would want to kill Laroth. It doesn't seem to fit in with his plans for Serime.
You've got to wonder, though, if the dark elf's half-sister likes it rough... what sort of effect would torture have on Laroth? Personally, I wouldn't want to go there - but maybe Serime would?
Gorgus would get to see the Dark Elf suffer. Good. The drow wouldn't be killed. Good. Serime wouldn't have to get revenge on Narg. Good. Narg could watch a little brotherly-sisterly interplay. Good.
Where's the downside?
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vampiric drow now eh?
and is it just me - but are drow becoming a thing with you - i believe all three of your fantasy stories include them
i think they should see what he'll tell them before torturing him. if they can make an ally out of him instead of an enemy then its got to be better
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| lordofthenight wrote: | vampiric drow now eh?
and is it just me - but are drow becoming a thing with you - i believe all three of your fantasy stories include them
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Mmm, a co-incidence! Arena only had them because people entered them. For this story they were mentioned a while back, and it was always my intention to go with them at some point, so it isn't a recent thing.
I did try and think of another race in Greed, but it needed to be some evil race which were intelligent and would be found in groups, and these were the only things I could think of!  I will have to dig out some more creatures...
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tempting as it is to see him use the torture things, I think questioning him first would be a better idea, especily with Serims help.
Keep it coming Chinaren, I printed this story off at work and read it all, took me ages but now I am all caught up!
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Let him live as long as he . . . cooperates. (Evil laughter)
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chinaren, chinaren, chinaren:
thou and thee mean you as in :
"Thou art about to die" or "Death shalt meet thee shortly"
thy means your as in :
"Thy death shalt occur shortly"
*sigh*shakes head* oh, well.
That was a nice fight scene (except for the blood licking, yech!)
I vote talk first.
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| Suneila wrote: | chinaren, chinaren, chinaren:
thou and thee mean you as in :
"Thou art about to die" or "Death shalt meet thee shortly"
thy means your as in :
"Thy death shalt occur shortly"
*sigh*shakes head* oh, well.
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Sorry Miss Sunbellina. Actually, I wrote the fight scene some time ago, before your lessons in Olde English and just inserted it* into this chapter, and I neglected to update it. I will go and correct things later, when I have some time. Pretty darned tootin' busy today. 
*Sometimes, when I have a good idea for a scene, I write it and then insert it when an opportunity arises.
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| Maybe you wouldn't be so busy if you ony had one or two stories.
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That wouldn't make any difference! The stories aren't the thing I have to be busy with today. My work is, plus real life stuff!
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I voted for letting him live, so long as he co-operates. If he doesn't, Kill him. If he does, well....he could make a useful companion in further trips in dangerous expiditions.
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Okay then. Letting him live looks to be the winner here. I will start work on the next chapter in the next couple of days, if I get enough time! 
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Hurry up, Chinaren! :biggrin:
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I just have to force myself to finish Arena, and then I will do the next Narg. I have been busier than usual lately (including today) so these will probably both be out in a few days.
Gosh, never had a 'hurry up' for one of my stories before!
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There's only room for one 'Nasty' in the party. Serime hasn't got a chance!
I say he strings her along, telling her that he's going to dispatch the other two at some future point. Meanwhile, he can enjoy all of her subtle, and not-so-subtle charms. Then, when it finally comes time for him to choose, he can ditch her like a used tissue.
Wow! I'm really getting into this whole anti-hero lark!
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| Quote: | | Wow! I'm really getting into this whole anti-hero lark |
LOL! 
It's strange, but I do tend to corrupt wherever I go! I put it down to my natural corruptive charisma. And beer of course.
Oh man! Has anyone seen "Euro-road trip" it has the best song ever and it just came up on my headphones.
<Heads over to the open forum> "Scotty doesn't know..."
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Beer: The Natural Anesthesia! Buy some Today!
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