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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 10:30 am Post subject: A Wolf's Tale

taken for editing Last edited by Liana on Thu Dec 16, 2010 8:36 am; edited 3 times in total

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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 2:56 pm Post subject:

I like the story, keep up the good work. Thumbs Up

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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 2:59 pm Post subject:

Thanks Mastermind, I fixed it.

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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 7:24 am Post subject:

Is this where you get disqualified for having a certain amount of mistakes? If so: first word "slowy" shouldn't that be slowly? line 3: A her words - At her words. line 22:this time - This time line 28:her paw - Her paw line 36:ll bring - I'll bring line 37:i'm - I'm And some more small case letters at the beginning of sentences. I hope that helps _________________ Greetings, I am here to have fun and (hopefully) make friends. Talk to me! ------------------------------------------------------- http://www.cityofif.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=4899 - Loyalties (Linear) http://www.cityofif.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=3919 - Daughter of the Forest (Linear) http://www.cityofif.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=5049&highlight= - Daughter of the Forest 2 (SG)

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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:49 am Post subject:

Thank you. I was having one of those my brain moves faster than my fingers moments. lol

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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 9:24 am Post subject:

Ahh..... this is one of my favorites. I can't wait until the sick twists and turns we thought up come into play! Oughta be good.. and hilarious! Luv ya sis! _________________ © 2007-2019 Lilith

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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 9:33 am Post subject:

Heya. Just read wolf's tail. I say it's great. Keep going I would like to see the twists and suspence toil out infront of me in the on coming chap. just to let you know I get these moments that my discriptive self is all to ready to give ideas. I speak english deliciously.

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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 12:52 pm Post subject:

I'm looking forward to chapter 2! Any idea when you'll post it? _________________ Greetings, I am here to have fun and (hopefully) make friends. Talk to me! ------------------------------------------------------- http://www.cityofif.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=4899 - Loyalties (Linear) http://www.cityofif.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=3919 - Daughter of the Forest (Linear) http://www.cityofif.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=5049&highlight= - Daughter of the Forest 2 (SG)

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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 1:19 pm Post subject:

i'll get the next chappy up as soon as possible

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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 5:20 pm Post subject:

editing Last edited by Liana on Thu Dec 16, 2010 8:37 am; edited 1 time in total

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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 7:37 am Post subject:

Very nice and intriguing, now i remember why i love your writings _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here

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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 5:15 pm Post subject:

Liana, this was far too short! I want to read more of this tale! Why do you torture me so? Better have another chappy up soon.

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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 7:02 pm Post subject:

seconds this Why does there have to be so many good writers in this forum, WHY? Oh, that's right, so that they attract still more, as though IF was some kind of literary singularity... Unfortunately, it occurs to me that once we get enough writers, I won't be able to devote enough time to all of them... And, if I may be sickeningly melodramatic for a small moment, that would be the worst torment of all. Keep on writing, Liana! signing off for a little while _________________ Thrash, dash and crash alike. Silent eyes decide the wise and unwise - for one that lies. Let it arise.

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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 6:30 pm Post subject:

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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 8:18 am Post subject:

Still love your writing as usual _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here

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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:13 pm Post subject:

Liana, I don't know if you noticed but your title for Chap. 2 was Home Sweet Den and the Chap. 3 was Home Sweet Home.... Or was this intentional? Anyhoot, still nice but it feels like it's still in the introductional phases! Come on! Where's the good stuff? wants to read more of this tale desperately _________________ © 2007-2019 Lilith

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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 5:13 pm Post subject:

the title was intentional..... and I'm working on it woman!!!!! the next few chappys are new..... i have to write them as i go!!! more coming soon.

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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 7:04 pm Post subject:

For some reason, stories that have an animal as the MC have always been a favorite of mine, especially canines. Even ignoring that, good work on the sotry, hope to see more soon.

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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 6:30 pm Post subject:

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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 12:23 pm Post subject:

nice very nice a bit short but i love it none the less _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here

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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 1:06 pm Post subject:

are you not continueing this anymore? _________________ Greetings, I am here to have fun and (hopefully) make friends. Talk to me! ------------------------------------------------------- http://www.cityofif.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=4899 - Loyalties (Linear) http://www.cityofif.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=3919 - Daughter of the Forest (Linear) http://www.cityofif.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=5049&highlight= - Daughter of the Forest 2 (SG)

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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 11:47 am Post subject:

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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 1:23 pm Post subject:

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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 3:16 pm Post subject:

Wow! I can never quite have a story that is told just frot he veiw of tha naimals, so this is really imressive to me! your awesome! _________________ My latest SG! (Image courtesy of the lovely Lebrenth)

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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 3:19 pm Post subject:

That's it???!!! WHY SO SHORT, LIANA??? WHY! _________________ © 2007-2019 Lilith

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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 9:37 am Post subject:

keep your panties on Lily!!!! I'm a bit rusty. give me a break!!!!

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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 1:36 pm Post subject:

looks abashed and picks up her black panties from the bookshelf where she threw them a couple nights ago oops... _________________ © 2007-2019 Lilith

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Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 4:11 am Post subject:

Aw what a cute scene... ^_^

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