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 Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:51 am Post subject: The Dark chapter 14 - Splatter. Part one. |
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To read this you need to be some kind of sicko that gets off on suffering, vulgar porn and all the rest. You know it, The Dark knows it, let’s not pretend any more. Just read it, get it over with, then relax in your newfound freedom from moral obligation.
This has been A Dark warning. Thank you for your attention.
Chapter 14. Splatter. Part one.
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Shocking! It was Prime's place! (Pun intended).
I detected this mistake:
| Quote: | | Stepping over the child’s body, he peering around the corner of a crumbling building. |
As for the rest, very intriguing and awesome. Now I'll go get my popcorn and wait for the second half.
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Ooh, exciting chapter there Dark.
~Stuffs popcorn into his face whilst waiting~
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*Steals some of Chinny's popcorn, slurps on Slushpuppy and chomps on peanut M'n'M's.*
Half the amusement comes simply from reading your warnings. Keep it coming, Darky.
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Part 2 of this chapter, complete with decision point, shall be posted in a new thread momentarily.
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Here...
Otherwise, the writing is grammatically and spelling-ly perfect.
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