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Pyrrhic
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 Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 10:43 am Post subject: Haikus! |
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Aging:
Anxiously into
a journey past home quickly
milestones turn vain
Milestones turn vain
Past fades beyond recalling
Intentions blurring
Intentions blurring
direction growing aimless
pine for simple days
Pine for simple days
They cannot be found anywhere
Past was a falsehood
Past was a falsehood
Created by unknowing
Embrace small knowing
Embrace small knowing
Not much to begin with, but
better than nothing
Better than nothing
is a place in time, not space
Go build the future.
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PopeAlessandrosXVIII
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| Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2014 7:15 am Post subject: I Think. . . |
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I don't think I've ever seen a string of Haikus before, but I must say that was enjoyable to read. Despite the repetitive lines it didn't seem too jumpy, just a little bit. Very good, can't wait to see more!
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