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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 7:36 pm Post subject: Chapter 1: the drama begins...... |
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Well written and totally, like, shocking.
I assume the DP is what you do next?
Well, you can either storm up and bitchslap them both, or pretend you didn't see anything and plot evil vengence. After all, revenge is a dish best served cold.
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you read my mind China. I'm gonna wait a bit and see what others have to say but you were right. That's exactly what I had in mind.
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Great story, it brings memories back...
I say confront the bi** and your soon to be 'ex' boyfriend.
This story really fits in with the name.
Keep at it and it'll be promoted.
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Go for the bitch slap.
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chinaren wrote: | Well written and totally, like, shocking.
I assume the DP is what you do next?
Well, you can either storm up and bitchslap them both, or pretend you didn't see anything and plot evil vengence. After all, revenge is a dish best served cold.
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I'm disappointed in you China. Obviously the best plan is to 'accidently' walk in on them, and then pretend you had a thing for Maddy all along. Get them drunk, get something started...
...then take pictures and leave. Blackmail material is always worth the effort. _________________ Punishment leads to Fear. Fear leads to Obedience. Obedience leads to Freedom. Therefore, Punishment leads to Freedom.
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Yo, nice story. I like the flow, really. Although that's all there is to it in a story like this. But I like it, seriously- It kinda reminds me of some Kalanna style.
Quote: | ...then take pictures and leave. Blackmail material is always worth the effort |
It says in the story that the character is 'under the radar', not completely weird and excessively cruel.
Although I'd like to F5 Lily, I think the character would probably shriek, run away, and cry. _________________ Chapter 5: The Rendezvous
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I like stories about screwed up high schools although yours is a little more conventional than mine...I mean at least the main character is a real student...
As for what she should do...well turn about's fair play and payback is a bitch.
I suggest walking up to him and with a cold smile on her face and playing like she knew he was cheating all the long...but only wanted to catch him at it.
Drop a few hints you've got another prospect all lined up while your at it... _________________ "It's not just about living forever...the trick is living with yourself forever..."
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Perfectly lovely Liania...Perfectly Lovely. Chinaren's right, this story is written well on all accounts. Good character potrayal, Good Setting, Good Written Illustration, and so far a good plot. Keep it Up!
Strangly, this reminds me of my High School *looks dreamy* although I don't why.
Having no good ideas of my own, I'll set around and wait for a poll.
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AH. I say plot revenge. I t sounds so cool, make it funny. Like sticking their pictures on fat people... Or something funny, but I dont know how. I'll come back with stuff, just not lordly's seggestion abiout get something started, or wait plot revenge, let the guy cheat on her or let them fight.
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Nice, from the looks of it, it's unanimous. Everyone wants Lisi to sneak away and plot revenge. Ok then dear readers, I'm up for suggestions on revenge. Scheme away!
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Dang it! I wanted some right away action, but I'm sure this story will have other types of...action.
Waiting for the next chappy.
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ok......poll is closed. I'll get the next chappy up soon.
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AWESOMENESS, in forte Lia. (I have no Idea why I said that it's a me thing I suppose) but since you've got a poll already that's all I can say for awhile
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A great start, Liana! Looking forward to seeing how this will develop...
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 5:01 pm Post subject: Chpater two |
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oooh if i'm correct this will lead up to you're great revenge *schemes* well i'm once again hoping I don't end up like most guys *defying fate is hard, but hey thats why I'm a half-dragon* and now, I say, Let there be evilness abound.
Thank you, and good night.
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Wonderful Liana absulutaly wonderful. It cought my attention once again. *looks about* bullsharks! where?
O but ofcourse my mind could make brain storming too... mmmm. very great liana and well put, quite funny what your charrecter said about sucking dace. LOL
I shall see I shall see- har har. Now To the plot and to the hospital, just hope he doesn't show up...
Give you any ideas
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Great dialogue, but I found this chapter a bit rushed, it was missing a description of the surroundings. This could be fleshed out a bit more with describing the scene, expressions on faces, and so on, to bring on more life.
Otherwise, good stuff!
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Is that any better CF? I tried.....
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Hey I think it is great man. I didn't mind on the seroundings because this is more focused upon feelings and poeple, expressions now that might be missing but I think It is great Liana.
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That is better!
The DP is not clear, though... there is only one real suggestion so far, and I cannot come up with any. You need to help your readers out at the end of each chapter, asking for suggestions. This guidance was also missing from your previous chapter too, we had to guess what the DP might be. This is something that a storygame might fail a review on.
Add a DP to your chapter, (e.g., what will happen next? or what will the character do? Maybe add a few options yourself. Check out a couple of other SG's for some examples of DPs at the end of the chapters.)
It might be a good idea to repeat the DP again as a new post, (as a few posts have been added now and people might not see your edit)
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Ok all....... what is Evey going to do? Plot away dear readers.
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that's a solid idea Lily........any others?
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The evil plots are good but what if Evey found some one for Lisi to parade in front of Rob and Maddie but have it where under the surface over time Lisi actually starts having feelings for this other guy that way not only will the damage be less on Lisi but it will help her plot her revenge on Rob and it will give her an extra person to help pull it off. just an idea though _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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I like it guys...... Lisi could tell maddy's boyfriend about the cheating and they could hook up to get back at them. then they could develope feelings for each other. but what about Evey?
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Perhaps Evey has an old score to settle with Lisi.
Having already posed as Lisi and spoiled things with Rob, (causing him to move on to Maddy) she's going to stir it up about some past incident, combine it with the current situation and make matters worse for Lisi, whilst all the while acting the innocent party.
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I don't know... i guess the friends backstabbing thing i guess is a bit farfaethched since evey is supposed to be helping Lisi out with her problems with Rob so i guess it could work but that might take Evey a bit out of character
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my poor innocent story is being corrupted..........just kidding. well I guess I'm gonna put a poll up soon. Crunchy, could you explain your idea a bit more? I don't if it's the lack of sleep catching up with me or what but I didn't quite understand it. Sorry I'm a bit dim at the moment..........I need sleep!!!!!
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*off topic to lilith that's what happens when you drink a 2 ltr of vault before work *
Crunchy's idea is good it's what i like to call the "Mean girls" move tir up drama and then sit back and enjoy the show as if you had nothing to do with it and i guess lilith is right we're talking high school so... i guess a little mean girls dash into the story might be fun to see _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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Personally, i would think this is hte time to reveal the big Family Secret of (insert plot device)! _________________ Sarothen, Mesoli, Gerastro
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ok so far I'm getting
Lisi sleeps with maddy's boy
Evey sleeps with Maddy's boy
some kind of backstabbing in the sister department
Lisi fakes a relationship with maddy's boy and falls for him
mean girls approach
big family secret
am I correct?
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good point lily. Nice idea by the way. Oh boy my story is being corrupted. I blame lily! *points at lily* just kidding sis. I guess I need to get a poll up here soon then *sigh*
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poll is up
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ugh....Din I feel your pain. So far the only option I didn't want to use is winning. Grrr.......Evey is supposed to help Lisi..... not hurt her more. I think you guys are trying to get Lisi to kill herself. I mean come on, give her a bit of a break here. oh well. i guess her entire world falling down around her ears makes for a better story *shrugs* lol. I'll keep the poll up for a couple more days. Then it'll be a few days after that before the next chappy is up.
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yayyyyyyy, my choice won, let glee flow forth from which it shouldn't
Ok, I feel weird now, really weird, anyone got some ways to get back to normal, (well, not normal normal, me normal)
well, back to business, I can't wait for the next chap., so hope to see it
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Ok.......poll's closed. Gimmee a bit to ponder the choice before I write. Next chappy will be up soon!!!!
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nice story chica!! _________________ ~Look not on the outside for true beauty, but look on which lies in the heart, soul, and mind.~
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Guess just by the poll that most of usare are sex mongers or agree that it is okay to sleep around *gags* _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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Nice SG here, Liana!
I really wanted to read something on this level right now , thankyou.
Looking forward to more,
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Ooo nice story Liana.
Liana wrote: | I fight with my old dodge shadow for five minutes before the door grudgingly opens. |
I drive a Dodge Shadow! (Even though I'm 15, I still drive around in it when my parents let me . It's gonna be mine soon.)
Anyway, that was a very interesting story I liked it a lot. It made me want to keep reading and finish. Hmm kind of a hard decision, it's so open. Evey could plot revenge against Maddy first, then leave the boyfriend next. Her and Maddy could get in a big fight in the hall, and then it elevates to something more. But since the polling is closed then I guess it's already decided?
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It's great to have some new readers. And yes Lisi's fate has been decided in a few days the new chappy will be up. i'm not sure how long it will take seeing as i just got a job and i do't know what my hours are. But don't fear dear readers the story must and will go on.
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taken for a little editing work
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Quote: | "Dammit.....I did it again!" |
*laughs so hard tears come out of her eyes* Ah, a total Paige moment there, lol!
Loved it sis. Now, of course Riley is going to come and ask Lisi why she left without waking him. What is the title of the story? Drama High, right? More drama.
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I guess Evey could come clean ( but that would make a good story short now wouldn't it) she could keep it from her i guess just add more drama onto more stuff that is already going on _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 12:47 pm Post subject: |
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'm thinking Evey disappears their father's house without telling Lisi what happended. I think that's a good choice don't you? Any other ideas?
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 4:24 pm Post subject: |
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Wow... laughed so hard at the Dammit I did it again!
I don't know what she should do... Hmm maybe have a sister fight and then they both beat on Riley because he gets Evey pregnant or something.
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 4:51 pm Post subject: |
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the whole idea is to somehow have Evey betray her sister and make everyone think Lisi slept with Riley
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Gotta love your humor and ideas . hmm a good ole rumor never hurts. Have it where Evey starts it and Lisi gets the worst end of it ( nothing like best friends betraying each other Muahh) _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 11:22 am Post subject: |
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so far i have
Evey departs, leaving her sister to take the blame for the Riley situation
Evey starts a nasty rumor about Lisi
Evey fixes it and admits it was her
any others?
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*sighs* alright dear saati. lol
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I F5 Lily's idea but i think Evey coming clean might be a good idea to keep for a later chapter. Her conscience will have to get the best of her soon _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 8:16 am Post subject: |
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hmm good point. but you know Evey is going to have to come clean with Lisi and Riley sooner or later just depends on when and how she does it. _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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sorry I've been gone so long. Damn spring fever! Poll's up! Vote now or die......just kidding.
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 5:15 pm Post subject: |
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so far the poll is very one sided......
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Evey isnt the evil twin she is just sick of Lisi acting as though their father is to blame for everything even though it was their mother who was sleeping around.
Evey is totally pee'd off with the world and how her hussy mother got all the $$ while her Dad lost all his friends and is out in the cold.
I obviously voted Evil Evey. Dont you love aliteration?
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editing
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Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 11:10 am Post subject: |
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Well it's time For Lisi to go bitch mode on Evey!!!! Evey deserves to get an earfull and i think that the Wrath of Lisi need to be unleashed _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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Heck no Kang!!!!
Lisi should be thanking Evey for getting some back at Maddie! SHe should sit backand wait to see how this pans out.. will Riley get infatuated with her and moon after her. _________________ ~ ~
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 6:36 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome, awesome, awesome!
*lightbulb appears over head* Transform *turns into Post-shipp, Sas, and nails up fliers that say, "party at the exchange students house, taste exotic Japanese drinks* and now I wait.
well this wil be fun but while I wait, I think thatLisi should take Riley to the next "yearbook" meeting and 'accidentaly' make out infront of Maddy and Rob, that would be awesome
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No, Maddy needs to feel the worst emotional pain possible. Drama is full of rumors, yes? Rumors fly like moths to the flame, they cannot be halted, so rumors will fly, better of for worse, growing larger and larger by the lies that are added to it.
Sleeping with Riley is something that some will appreciate but most will call it one thing, "SLUTTY." There must be repercussions for Evey and you. Some will obviously treat her with disgust and others with admiration for her bravery. You can use this to fuel your anger, perhaps even Maddy spread these rumors, and a more devious plot can begin.
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more people need to vote!!!! Thank you Suke and Chemai. Everyone else......VOTE! lol
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:48 am Post subject: |
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well then...I guess it's time for Lisi to grow some balls...lol
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She starts going out with Riley in secret and then when she feels she can trust him tells him (and shows him) how Rob and Maddie are cheating on them. He is at first heartbroken, but then angry with her because he thinks she was only going with him to get Rob back.
Of course, by this time they are both deeply in love with each other. _________________
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:50 pm Post subject: |
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ok....so far I have
use him
fall in love with him
anything else?
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Oh come off it Lilith! Be romantic! Can't hurt! _________________
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Short yes but still good.. hmm pretty much everyone has taken my ideas so i'll have to wait untill nexy chappy to geive any input _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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You can pretend they were your ideas if you want! _________________
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hmm i guess using him would be good for the moment them maybe plot against evey at the same time _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 10:01 am Post subject: |
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ok people....i have a tie. BREAK IT SOMEONE!!!!
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Maybe you could you with the staple of tied chapters and combine then? She starts off using him, but gradually falls for him and when she's finished using him she doesn't want to let go? _________________
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ok shall use blacksmith's suggestion because i was already thinking the same thing when the , now broken, tie came up. A new chappy with be up in a few days
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yay can't wait for the next chappy and wow love the avi it really takes my breath away _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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Woo! I have power!
And capital letters please. _________________
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Crud! i was going ot say that it turns out he knows it was Evey not Livy cause Evey slipped up and he just wants to trick Livy..
or a crazy p[lot twist.. rob, riley and maddy are all shebanging and they have set Livy up for a menage a trois plus one...
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 10:43 am Post subject: |
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her name is Lisi not Livy. And as explained in numerous chappys none of lisi's friends know of Evey.
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that kinda happens when you jump in to a sg while in progress gotta give a little leeway _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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Hell no. Play it out. _________________
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hmm nah can't fess up not yet there is still too much to plot out so many more victims that need to be caught in the net muahhhh! _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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Is Riley rich? Does he have connections? If so, maybe she can get uh...a few things besides physical enjoyment. _________________
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seriously - the guy isnt any better than maddy. riley doesnt know she is cheating on him but he is quite happy to cheat on her so is he really any better?
as for the fact you (liana) said that no one knows Evey that was just what Lisi believes. dont close yourself off to plot twists so thoroughly as you will be limiting the flow of the story. havent you seen 'wild things' youspend the whole time assuming that no one knows anyone else and then through a series of flashbacks (very well done ones btw)you find out that two of the characters had met previously DESPITE the lead character have thought that no one else knew them.
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Hmm, Riley seems to care for her though since he's bristlin' whenever she gets touched by another boy or maybe he just wants her for sex's sake. Who knows? All will hopefully be reviled on C7, so, uh...HURRY. _________________
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ok a poll is going up. Sorry I've been gone so long.
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I said no. If he genuinely has feelings for her, then he'll be crushed to find she appears to be only doing it for revenge. I say that they go on like they are. _________________
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NIce chapter! Although slightly...
Anyway, I voted 'yes'. The state she's in, she's not about to argue, and anyway, it'll make for a really good fight scene at the end of the sg. _________________
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aww come on.......no one else wants to vote?
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Well 'Does she have sex with him?' is a slightly ... strange poll title, intit? _________________
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 10:45 pm Post subject: |
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I will vote yes because I'm bored and I know certain people here would love to see it. _________________
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Amichan Treasurer
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Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:21 pm Post subject: |
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Yes i am back ( well sort of ) I say yes the whole having sex. fan will want it plus it will give you a chance to see how explicit your writing can really get muahhh _________________ Check out the City of IF Facebook page here
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Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 5:40 am Post subject: |
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sorry about taking so long with this one. I wrote the next chappy and had a friend look at it. Apparently my scene was not up to standards. So i will begin rewriting it now. sorry ><
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:25 am Post subject: |
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Awww.....
too bad I didn't get here earlier I could share my seemingly billiant idea.
Too bad his parents got there early if you get my drift.
For those slow on the uptake, I'm saying the parents should unexpectedly come home early while Lisi decided to go 'through' with it. That would just cause more drama......
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Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:40 pm Post subject: |
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you should definetly go ahead with the sex idea
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aviva claribel Visitor
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Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:40 pm Post subject: |
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you should definetly go ahead with the sex idea
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muirne Tourist
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Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 8:59 am Post subject: |
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forgie me if im a little out of step:im new
i love this story, i love it so much! its so intense! cant wait to see ur new chappy!keep it up. you might also want to think about publishing it ,i think it will be a major attraction for teens!
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muirne Tourist
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Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 9:00 am Post subject: |
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forgie me if im a little out of step:im new
i love this story, i love it so much! its so intense! cant wait to see ur new chappy!keep it up. you might also want to think about publishing it ,i think it will be a major attraction for teens![/code]
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