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Oh come off it Lilith! Be romantic! Can't hurt!
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| Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 9:37 am Post subject: |
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Short yes but still good.. hmm pretty much everyone has taken my ideas so i'll have to wait untill nexy chappy to geive any input
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| Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 10:46 am Post subject: |
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You can pretend they were your ideas if you want!
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| Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 11:58 am Post subject: |
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hmm i guess using him would be good for the moment them maybe plot against evey at the same time
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| Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 10:01 am Post subject: |
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| ok people....i have a tie. BREAK IT SOMEONE!!!!
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Maybe you could you with the staple of tied chapters and combine then? She starts off using him, but gradually falls for him and when she's finished using him she doesn't want to let go?
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| Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 4:04 am Post subject: |
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| ok shall use blacksmith's suggestion because i was already thinking the same thing when the , now broken, tie came up. A new chappy with be up in a few days
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| Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 8:43 am Post subject: |
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yay can't wait for the next chappy and wow love the avi it really takes my breath away
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Woo! I have power!
And capital letters please.
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Crud! i was going ot say that it turns out he knows it was Evey not Livy cause Evey slipped up and he just wants to trick Livy..
or a crazy p[lot twist.. rob, riley and maddy are all shebanging and they have set Livy up for a menage a trois plus one...
(i am evil.  )
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| Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 10:43 am Post subject: |
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| her name is Lisi not Livy. And as explained in numerous chappys none of lisi's friends know of Evey.
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that kinda happens when you jump in to a sg while in progress gotta give a little leeway
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editing
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 2:14 pm Post subject: |
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Hell no. Play it out.
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hmm nah can't fess up not yet there is still too much to plot out so many more victims that need to be caught in the net muahhhh!
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Is Riley rich? Does he have connections? If so, maybe she can get uh...a few things besides physical enjoyment.
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seriously - the guy isnt any better than maddy. riley doesnt know she is cheating on him but he is quite happy to cheat on her so is he really any better?
as for the fact you (liana) said that no one knows Evey that was just what Lisi believes. dont close yourself off to plot twists so thoroughly as you will be limiting the flow of the story. havent you seen 'wild things' youspend the whole time assuming that no one knows anyone else and then through a series of flashbacks (very well done ones btw)you find out that two of the characters had met previously DESPITE the lead character have thought that no one else knew them.
dont close doors.
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Hmm, Riley seems to care for her though since he's bristlin' whenever she gets touched by another boy or maybe he just wants her for sex's sake. Who knows? All will hopefully be reviled on C7, so, uh...HURRY.
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| ok a poll is going up. Sorry I've been gone so long.
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I said no. If he genuinely has feelings for her, then he'll be crushed to find she appears to be only doing it for revenge. I say that they go on like they are.
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NIce chapter! Although slightly...
Anyway, I voted 'yes'. The state she's in, she's not about to argue, and anyway, it'll make for a really good fight scene at the end of the sg.
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 11:01 am Post subject: |
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| aww come on.......no one else wants to vote?
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Well 'Does she have sex with him?' is a slightly ... strange poll title, intit?
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I will vote yes because I'm bored and I know certain people here would love to see it.
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Yes i am back ( well sort of ) I say yes the whole having sex. fan will want it plus it will give you a chance to see how explicit your writing can really get muahhh
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sorry about taking so long with this one. I wrote the next chappy and had a friend look at it. Apparently my scene was not up to standards. So i will begin rewriting it now. sorry >< 
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Awww.....
too bad I didn't get here earlier I could share my seemingly billiant idea.
Too bad his parents got there early if you get my drift.
For those slow on the uptake, I'm saying the parents should unexpectedly come home early while Lisi decided to go 'through' with it. That would just cause more drama......
Too bad I got here too late :'(
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| you should definetly go ahead with the sex idea
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| you should definetly go ahead with the sex idea
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forgie me if im a little out of step:im new
i love this story, i love it so much! its so intense! cant wait to see ur new chappy!keep it up. you might also want to think about publishing it ,i think it will be a major attraction for teens!
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forgie me if im a little out of step:im new
i love this story, i love it so much! its so intense! cant wait to see ur new chappy!keep it up. you might also want to think about publishing it ,i think it will be a major attraction for teens![/code]
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